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Friday, September 24, 2010

Outtake, from a work in progress

"Seriously?" he said.  "Now?  You're asking me this now?"

"I like her," Abe said.  "She's a good girl.  Hell, she's a great girl.  And I want to know what you're--"

Luca caught Abe's wrist and bent down, nose to nose and eye to eye.  "I pay you not to ask that question," he said, grinding the words out between his teeth and squeezing Abe's arm so hard he could feel the bone's shift.  "I pay you very well not to ask that question."

The old man winced, but he didn't back down.  "I just don't want to see her get hurt."

"Then don't look."

5 comments:

  1. Whoa! I totally want to know what happens!

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  2. Oh you two! Thank you for saying that. I hope to finish this book, one of these days. Meanwhile, I love you man!!!

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  3. Chica, as your crit partner, I must say you're holding out on me! Make with the manuscript! I must read more!

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  4. LOL, Nichole. I will as soon as I can!

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